Kit awoke to the alarm as he did on most days: groaning and frustrated at the little sleep he got. He screened his eyes as he turned the blinds, ready for the attack of bright light. He was met by none. Slightly fazed by the fog that was blocking his view of anything and everything outside his window, Kit trudged to the front door and swept in the newspaper. Squinting at the unusual headline -"Ether Maitland Murdered"- Kit wondered why the same seemed so familiar, but before he could figure it out, the fog that had somehow invaded the building's corridor engulfed him through the still-open door.
Kit awoke to a ringing alarm again, but six years younger and in a previous home. Kit got ready and headed to school, equipped with five pencils and an eraser, nervous yet ready to take his first SAT. As he made his way across town, he wished he'd taken the bus for the thick fog that morning was worse than the pressing darkness at night. Trying to make sure he was going in the right direction, Kit was concentrating on the GPS on his phone when he bumped into something. Or someone, to be more specific.
"Ow! I'm so sorry, it's the fog and-"
"Don't worry about it, boy," said a gruff, familiar voice.
"Mr. Evans?" Kit was so grateful to hear the friendly man's voice in that he didn't notice how unusually strained it was.
"Can't... stop now, Kit. I've got somewhere to be."
Shocked at the old man's drastically changed demeanor, Kit wondered if he had said something wrong. Mr. Evans was the most amiable old man he knew, and he enjoyed listening to his youthful stories. Yet today he seemed distracted enough to march off without a proper hello. Momentarily muddled, it was a few seconds before Kit saw something on the ground. He picked it up, thinking he would give it to Mr. Evans later. When Kit touched the wet, thick square, he realized it was a partially formed polaroid picture. Unable to see clearly in the fog, Kit stuffed it into his bag.
As Kit went to bed that night, turning up the volume on his headphones to drown out the loud arguments in the next room, he forgot all about the little polaroid.
The next morning, Kit woke up in an apartment, six years older once more.
"The question is, what color will everything be when I come for you?"- Mark Zusak, The Book Thief
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ReplyDeleteAs he made his way across town, he wished he'd taken the bus for the thick fog that morning was worse than the pressing darkness at night.
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How does the polaroid link to Kit? Is he a potential murder target now?
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The simplicity in your writing is really nice, however make sure to include metaphors and other devices more, as it really adds to the writing. You overall did a great job on this blog!